The First Note Sketch Reference

For each of my written stories, I typically do a little quickie sketch to base it off of. It helps me write progressions, you know?

So this is my reference for The First Note, the first chapter of The Glimmer Note series. The last picture is what Juniper looks like at the very end of everything. It's after she's laid all of the eggs and after her breasts eventually shrunk down somewhat. As a side note, the breasts of all the girls in these stories do eventually shrink, since a lot of that mass was milk. While they always end up much larger than they used to be, it's at least somewhat easier to manage.

I have all of the sketch progressions already done (even for chapters I haven't written yet). Some are better, some are worse. Sara is up next. What do you think?